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You spent the days and nights with me,
You made me feel safe, loved,
You made me happy,
And I gave you the one thing I can only give once,
I trusted you with this,
The nights we spent would be forever,
You took me out the darkness and showed me the light,
The light I thought was much farther away,
The light soon faded and the darkness once again engolved me,
My heart broke in two and you watched it happen,
It dragged me down, down to lower than low,
It surrounded me, suffacating me,
Pushing me towords etural darkness, death,
You left me in the dark, pushing me futher in,
Watched as I fought on my own,
Struggled against this englosing darkness,
The voice of an angel reached out a hand,
She took my arm and pulled me up,
Up leaving the darkness,
As I watched the darkness fade,
Silent tears ran down my face,
The tears I hopefully would be leaving down there,
The tears holding the memory of us,
Each drop holding a night we shared,
As they dropped to stay in the darkness,
A small smile came accross my face,
The angel smiled as she touched my face,
She told me to ignite my light and let it shine,
She told me to own the sky,
She help me be strong and forget the past,
I will be stronger and she has given me the strength,
As my feet land on the light she leaves me,
My heart repairs its self and I smile as I walk down the path of life once more.
You made me feel safe, loved,
You made me happy,
And I gave you the one thing I can only give once,
I trusted you with this,
The nights we spent would be forever,
You took me out the darkness and showed me the light,
The light I thought was much farther away,
The light soon faded and the darkness once again engolved me,
My heart broke in two and you watched it happen,
It dragged me down, down to lower than low,
It surrounded me, suffacating me,
Pushing me towords etural darkness, death,
You left me in the dark, pushing me futher in,
Watched as I fought on my own,
Struggled against this englosing darkness,
The voice of an angel reached out a hand,
She took my arm and pulled me up,
Up leaving the darkness,
As I watched the darkness fade,
Silent tears ran down my face,
The tears I hopefully would be leaving down there,
The tears holding the memory of us,
Each drop holding a night we shared,
As they dropped to stay in the darkness,
A small smile came accross my face,
The angel smiled as she touched my face,
She told me to ignite my light and let it shine,
She told me to own the sky,
She help me be strong and forget the past,
I will be stronger and she has given me the strength,
As my feet land on the light she leaves me,
My heart repairs its self and I smile as I walk down the path of life once more.
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So I don't really know what this is. Is it a poem? A short story? No clue I just started writing after doing something I should have done months ago. This is a huge thing for me as I got my heart broken for the first time and I had no clue how much it hurt. For months I've been trying to get him out my head but I relised that I wasn't doing it right. This might seem small for you but I blocked and deleted the guy on question on msn. For me this took huge strength and one song really helped me. Its been out for a while but I only recently listened to the lyrics. Firework by Katy Perry. It just made me feel strong and it spoke to me. I actually cried so much listening to this song and while writing this! I don't know if I'll keep this up but yeah <3
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Not your best peice in terms of writing skill HOWEVER and its a big however, it is your best in terms of emotive force and really protraying youre thoughts, which is an amazing way to get over a harsh relationship, i did the same thing when i ended up breaking up with someone who i'd been with for over 3 years. So i can really feel what your protraying in this. Although another good method of working your emotion out mate is to write this sort of stuff to yourself, nobody else, with all your feelings and whatnot, but write it on paper, so that you can burn it, its like your burning away those feelings and once and for all getting rid of them, well it worked for me, over time. Also blocking/deleting this guy took loads of courage mate, and you did the right thing, its good to know youre slowyl getting over it, even if it hurts. Keep well mate.